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以下是吾明天英语口试的文章,希望大家能多多帮忙修改错误。
(别怨文短,只是个2分钟的口试)

  A very good morning to all. I am here to discuss about ''The Benefits of Group Discussion''

  Firstly,group discussion helps improve our study. Since most of the student are shy to ask their question directly in the class,group discussion provides students a chance to seek help with their problems in their study.

  Secondly,joining a group discussion strengthen the relationship between we and our friends. We are actually interacting with them as we help each other or solve problems together. Eventually,our social skill will also improve and this will be a great help for us in the future.

  Lastly,forming a group discussion is a good way to spend our free time. This will cover us from the risk of getting involve in unhealthy activities such as illegal racing and wondering around hypermarkets and cybercafes.

  This marks the end of my speech. Thanks.

这几天为了口试彻夜难眠,希望各位同志多多帮忙,让吾摆脱这烦人的束缚,继续沉迷于KEY的神作中。^^
本主题由 管理员 Roc-Dark 于 2011/10/9 3:28:45 执行 主题分类 操作
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多谢,帮大忙了,这样一来文章就完成了,明日安心上阵。。。

在此也感谢一下Miyazakehime的修改。。
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